literature

Miscommunication

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My mongoose breathed a story,
words dripping in bright colors
from his mouth
to shatter at my feet.

Songbirds escaped from my eyes
to chase the winter bubbles that formed
from the creature’s broken syllables.

The savor of Chaos shifted
to a perfect D minor,
and its tremor splashed shadows
across the canvas of feathers and fur.

They surfed above me
on a vermilion wind
which tasted like Persian sunshine
and smelled like painted starlight.

Sound failed my tongue
and vanished from my ears,
for colors abandoned me on shimmering wings
to join the beasts in flight.

My feet turned to stone
as their eyes slid around their heads
to capture me.

They asked me why I had no face.
I told them I had not heard the tale.
I was supposed to write a poem that didn't make sense--the sort of poem that describes things that happen in a dream.

It wasn't supposed to be about anything, but after writing it I think there was a sort of theme--how people lose their connection and understanding of nature and beauty. Or even a time where there's an inside joke that you don't share--how everyone knows what it is and connects and finds it wonderful but you're just sort of lost and awkward. Both of these things can leave one feeling a distinct lack of identity.

Hope you enjoy, even though I write such bad poetry and my free verse is even worse than my versed :3
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Willowbarkrc's avatar
Oh wow o.o Thats really amazing. Your such a good writer asdfj